Mirror Force by Patrick Kun

TheMisdirectingHand · 08-15-2011, 02:04 AM

Do you guys see any flashes? If so, please tell me so I can take it down/make it public if there are not any.

Albert · 08-15-2011, 02:45 AM

Not so much a flash, but the handling can be a little better. The turnover was a bit too fast, so slow that down a bit if you can. Also, try not to go directly into the spread as soon as you cut the cards. That may be a give away on how it's done to more experienced magicians or those who are just good at perceiving minor details like that. However, I did like the patter of "if the machine isn't working, hit it until it does".

All in all, I recommend you retake it, but it's not such a major problem that laymen will find out how it's done.

TheMisdirectingHand · 08-15-2011, 02:51 AM

Will do! Thanks, Albert! I'll have to do it another time though, so I'll just have to leave this here...

la0o9 · 08-15-2011, 04:58 AM

so unnatural... i almost figured it out just from this( i already know how it's done beforehand so that might have been cheating, but it's still very easy to see). Albert's advices are spot on, you might want to take the video off to prevent more people with good eyes figuring it out

Fin · 08-15-2011, 05:45 AM

I know the mirror force well and I disagree with la0o9 just a little bit. I don't think laymen will spot it. I think it only needs a little work and I agree with Albert on where the work needs to be done but try not to forget what it's like to be a layman. I honestly don't think they would spot it. la0o9 just has great eyesight ;-)

The slapping the deck made me laugh out loud. Very funny. And the emotional music had me almost ready to storm the beaches in Normandy, but alas I'm not there so I'll just eat some curry instead

Albert · 08-15-2011, 05:49 AM

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Originally Posted by Fin

And the emotional music had me almost ready to storm the beaches in Normandy, but alas I'm not there so I'll just eat some curry instead

But... but... I want curry...

Will you share some with me? Me give you cookie~

Fin · 08-15-2011, 05:50 AM

Is it a bacon cookie? I like your style!!!!

TheMisdirectingHand · 08-15-2011, 06:40 AM

Mass Effect is quite awesome, Fin.

Also guys, I'll remake it, but then the slapping of the deck won't be the same...

08-15-2011, 02:04 AM	#1
TheMisdirectingHand David Nguyen Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Rosemead, California Posts: 406	Mirror Force by Patrick Kun Do you guys see any flashes? If so, please tell me so I can take it down/make it public if there are not any. __________________ "There are three types of people in this world; •People who talk and never do: The Lower Class •People who talk and do at the same time: The Middle Class •People who do before they ever talk: The Upper Class A real man does not need to talk. We are the upper class." -Joseph Lau

08-15-2011, 02:45 AM	#2
Albert DarkSleightZ Artist Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Canada Posts: 671 Donor Score: 110	Not so much a flash, but the handling can be a little better. The turnover was a bit too fast, so slow that down a bit if you can. Also, try not to go directly into the spread as soon as you cut the cards. That may be a give away on how it's done to more experienced magicians or those who are just good at perceiving minor details like that. However, I did like the patter of "if the machine isn't working, hit it until it does". All in all, I recommend you retake it, but it's not such a major problem that laymen will find out how it's done. __________________ "Bluffing is an important act to all strategies." - Lelouch Lamperouge

08-15-2011, 02:51 AM	#3
TheMisdirectingHand David Nguyen Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Rosemead, California Posts: 406	Will do! Thanks, Albert! I'll have to do it another time though, so I'll just have to leave this here... __________________ "There are three types of people in this world; •People who talk and never do: The Lower Class •People who talk and do at the same time: The Middle Class •People who do before they ever talk: The Upper Class A real man does not need to talk. We are the upper class." -Joseph Lau

08-15-2011, 04:58 AM	#4
la0o9 Move monkey atm Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Not where you'd want to go :P Posts: 747	so unnatural... i almost figured it out just from this( i already know how it's done beforehand so that might have been cheating, but it's still very easy to see). Albert's advices are spot on, you might want to take the video off to prevent more people with good eyes figuring it out __________________ "Doubt isn't the same as saying people are bad, it simply means you actually care, 100% trust is nothing more than ignorance"~ Akiyama Shinichi- Liar Game "It's not the destination but the road to it that is worth the trip" "Be careful what you wish for... it might just come true"~ old saying "It's a small world, but only relatively" "Reality is not the world, it is the way humankind depicts the world, thus when you alter a person's way of seeing the world, you alter reality itself"

08-15-2011, 06:40 AM	#8
TheMisdirectingHand David Nguyen Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Rosemead, California Posts: 406	Mass Effect is quite awesome, Fin. Also guys, I'll remake it, but then the slapping of the deck won't be the same... __________________ "There are three types of people in this world; •People who talk and never do: The Lower Class •People who talk and do at the same time: The Middle Class •People who do before they ever talk: The Upper Class A real man does not need to talk. We are the upper class." -Joseph Lau

08-15-2011, 05:45 AM	#5
Fin Join Date: Jun 2011 Posts: 530	I know the mirror force well and I disagree with la0o9 just a little bit. I don't think laymen will spot it. I think it only needs a little work and I agree with Albert on where the work needs to be done but try not to forget what it's like to be a layman. I honestly don't think they would spot it. la0o9 just has great eyesight ;-) The slapping the deck made me laugh out loud. Very funny. And the emotional music had me almost ready to storm the beaches in Normandy, but alas I'm not there so I'll just eat some curry instead

08-15-2011, 05:50 AM	#7
Fin Join Date: Jun 2011 Posts: 530	Is it a bacon cookie? I like your style!!!!