Jumpgate

GloriousMagic · 03-25-2011, 01:27 PM

So here is my take at Mark's Jumpgate sandwich. Mine is just a variation of it. Please tell me what you think of the performance

TheMisdirectingHand · 03-25-2011, 01:53 PM

Very nice. It's a very modern and simplified variation. The only thing I noticed was that there was no selection... but it was just a variation, I'm sure you could do better if you wanted to. I liked it.

la0o9 · 03-25-2011, 11:18 PM

nice, it wasn't so bad... but you gotta work on that lift ( yea... it didn't flash or anything, but it still looks unnatural, it won't need to be at Mark's level, but it needs to be smoother)

TheMisdirectingHand · 03-26-2011, 12:54 AM

Better...

I'm in love with the music this time around...

GloriousMagic · 03-26-2011, 03:52 AM

CopyCat, erm... I would like to know what you feel about my lift that is unnatural... Thks

la0o9 · 03-26-2011, 01:23 PM

the second flip, that's it... i think that both flips must be executed without your right hand hovering over the deck at anytime( you have the Paul Wilson's DL workshop right? use his technique of keeping a break, or just practice till you can push it over without the need of a break, which is what i'm doing)

Mark · 03-27-2011, 08:55 AM

I actually liked it a lot and I don't mind the lifts nor would any spectator in the world.

There were three little things that bothered me though. The first one being the way you took the jokers off of the egde of the table, the second one being the extremely fast appearance of the face-down selection between them and the third one being the ending. What was the reason for having the cards placed like that, with the deck closest to the camera? It seemed like you wanted to hide something and used the deck as some sort of distraction, while obviously that isn't the actual reason.

Albert · 03-27-2011, 04:34 PM

The man has spoken! *Dramatic music*

GloriousMagic · 03-28-2011, 09:26 AM

Thanks Mark! I will take note of the points and certainly work on this more

03-25-2011, 01:27 PM	#1
GloriousMagic Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Singapore Posts: 35	Jumpgate So here is my take at Mark's Jumpgate sandwich. Mine is just a variation of it. Please tell me what you think of the performance

03-25-2011, 01:53 PM	#2
TheMisdirectingHand David Nguyen Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Rosemead, California Posts: 406	Very nice. It's a very modern and simplified variation. The only thing I noticed was that there was no selection... but it was just a variation, I'm sure you could do better if you wanted to. I liked it. __________________ "There are three types of people in this world; •People who talk and never do: The Lower Class •People who talk and do at the same time: The Middle Class •People who do before they ever talk: The Upper Class A real man does not need to talk. We are the upper class." -Joseph Lau

03-25-2011, 11:18 PM	#3
la0o9 Move monkey atm Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Not where you'd want to go :P Posts: 747	nice, it wasn't so bad... but you gotta work on that lift ( yea... it didn't flash or anything, but it still looks unnatural, it won't need to be at Mark's level, but it needs to be smoother) __________________ "Doubt isn't the same as saying people are bad, it simply means you actually care, 100% trust is nothing more than ignorance"~ Akiyama Shinichi- Liar Game "It's not the destination but the road to it that is worth the trip" "Be careful what you wish for... it might just come true"~ old saying "It's a small world, but only relatively" "Reality is not the world, it is the way humankind depicts the world, thus when you alter a person's way of seeing the world, you alter reality itself"

03-26-2011, 12:54 AM	#4
TheMisdirectingHand David Nguyen Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Rosemead, California Posts: 406	Better... I'm in love with the music this time around... __________________ "There are three types of people in this world; •People who talk and never do: The Lower Class •People who talk and do at the same time: The Middle Class •People who do before they ever talk: The Upper Class A real man does not need to talk. We are the upper class." -Joseph Lau

03-26-2011, 01:23 PM	#6
la0o9 Move monkey atm Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Not where you'd want to go :P Posts: 747	the second flip, that's it... i think that both flips must be executed without your right hand hovering over the deck at anytime( you have the Paul Wilson's DL workshop right? use his technique of keeping a break, or just practice till you can push it over without the need of a break, which is what i'm doing) __________________ "Doubt isn't the same as saying people are bad, it simply means you actually care, 100% trust is nothing more than ignorance"~ Akiyama Shinichi- Liar Game "It's not the destination but the road to it that is worth the trip" "Be careful what you wish for... it might just come true"~ old saying "It's a small world, but only relatively" "Reality is not the world, it is the way humankind depicts the world, thus when you alter a person's way of seeing the world, you alter reality itself"

03-26-2011, 03:52 AM	#5
GloriousMagic Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Singapore Posts: 35	CopyCat, erm... I would like to know what you feel about my lift that is unnatural... Thks

03-27-2011, 08:55 AM	#7
Mark Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 935	I actually liked it a lot and I don't mind the lifts nor would any spectator in the world. There were three little things that bothered me though. The first one being the way you took the jokers off of the egde of the table, the second one being the extremely fast appearance of the face-down selection between them and the third one being the ending. What was the reason for having the cards placed like that, with the deck closest to the camera? It seemed like you wanted to hide something and used the deck as some sort of distraction, while obviously that isn't the actual reason.

03-27-2011, 04:34 PM	#8
Albert DarkSleightZ Artist Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Canada Posts: 671 Donor Score: 110	The man has spoken! Dramatic music __________________ "Bluffing is an important act to all strategies." - Lelouch Lamperouge

03-28-2011, 09:26 AM	#9
GloriousMagic Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Singapore Posts: 35	Thanks Mark! I will take note of the points and certainly work on this more