My new Ebook

Exscaly · 01-20-2013, 08:13 AM

Just a few things. In Mystery Surprise, you mention 2 jokers at the start of the description and they never come back. Where did they go? Also, I think it is a bit overpriced. The tricks themselves... I swear I've seen very similar tricks on youtube (I think your Mystery Card trick had a very similar version performed by Albert in his April performance). From what I've seen, they're not hugely original. If they are, please give more of a description of the effects. Just doing a quick browse on lybrary, I found two other ebooks at $10 which had 9 and 10 tricks in them, and their descriptions seemed more original, and more engaging.

I think just an edit of your descriptions, and perhaps the inclusion of two or three more tricks could make this a very attractive ebook.

Good luck!
Exscaly

01-20-2013, 08:13 AM	#2
Exscaly Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 8	Just a few things. In Mystery Surprise, you mention 2 jokers at the start of the description and they never come back. Where did they go? Also, I think it is a bit overpriced. The tricks themselves... I swear I've seen very similar tricks on youtube (I think your Mystery Card trick had a very similar version performed by Albert in his April performance). From what I've seen, they're not hugely original. If they are, please give more of a description of the effects. Just doing a quick browse on lybrary, I found two other ebooks at $10 which had 9 and 10 tricks in them, and their descriptions seemed more original, and more engaging. I think just an edit of your descriptions, and perhaps the inclusion of two or three more tricks could make this a very attractive ebook. Good luck! Exscaly