Confidential Variation (No Platter)

TheMisdirectingHand · 05-31-2011, 04:58 AM

What do you think? Feedback is appreciated.

la0o9 · 05-31-2011, 08:10 AM

first of all, it's "patter", not "platter", second, it was good, but you need more work

MarkoViner · 05-31-2011, 09:09 AM

Yeah I wondered what plattered meant

I like the idea behind it and everything, my only suggestion I could give you is to practice more.

TheMisdirectingHand · 06-01-2011, 06:26 AM

Oops, that's a typo, my mistake ahaha... I meant to type 'patter', I feel lousy now.

Kieran Oloughlin · 06-01-2011, 09:30 AM

Good job.

05-31-2011, 04:58 AM	#1
TheMisdirectingHand David Nguyen Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Rosemead, California Posts: 406	Confidential Variation (No Platter) What do you think? Feedback is appreciated. __________________ "There are three types of people in this world; •People who talk and never do: The Lower Class •People who talk and do at the same time: The Middle Class •People who do before they ever talk: The Upper Class A real man does not need to talk. We are the upper class." -Joseph Lau

05-31-2011, 08:10 AM	#2
la0o9 Move monkey atm Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Not where you'd want to go :P Posts: 747	first of all, it's "patter", not "platter", second, it was good, but you need more work __________________ "Doubt isn't the same as saying people are bad, it simply means you actually care, 100% trust is nothing more than ignorance"~ Akiyama Shinichi- Liar Game "It's not the destination but the road to it that is worth the trip" "Be careful what you wish for... it might just come true"~ old saying "It's a small world, but only relatively" "Reality is not the world, it is the way humankind depicts the world, thus when you alter a person's way of seeing the world, you alter reality itself"

06-01-2011, 06:26 AM	#4
TheMisdirectingHand David Nguyen Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Rosemead, California Posts: 406	Oops, that's a typo, my mistake ahaha... I meant to type 'patter', I feel lousy now. __________________ "There are three types of people in this world; •People who talk and never do: The Lower Class •People who talk and do at the same time: The Middle Class •People who do before they ever talk: The Upper Class A real man does not need to talk. We are the upper class." -Joseph Lau

05-31-2011, 09:09 AM	#3
MarkoViner Join Date: May 2011 Location: Serbia,Novi sad Posts: 78	Yeah I wondered what plattered meant I like the idea behind it and everything, my only suggestion I could give you is to practice more.

06-01-2011, 09:30 AM	#5
Kieran Oloughlin Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Australia Posts: 414	Good job.