A quickie

thetophatfirm · 05-05-2012, 08:55 AM

Hey guys,

here is a little free style presentation I came up with!

I know my movements were un-magical and there was too much patter

but other than the fumbling, what do you think?

KGaborMagic · 05-05-2012, 10:23 AM

This was unexpected. I like the idea!
But yeah... too much patter

Mark · 05-06-2012, 09:24 AM

Saw it coming.. though I had no idea when.

And since you already posted my thoughts yourself, be sure to clean up the performance.

Very neat nonetheless. I wonder if this angle would lend itself to a bigger climax (like the whole deck changing).

thetophatfirm · 05-07-2012, 10:01 AM

A bigger climax?! Where can I go to learn bigger climax's?

I have cleaned it up to about this point, when I showed it to a few layman they were pretty convinced, a whole deck would feel awesome man

05-05-2012, 08:55 AM	#1
thetophatfirm Red Join Date: Nov 2011 Posts: 162	A quickie Hey guys, here is a little free style presentation I came up with! I know my movements were un-magical and there was too much patter but other than the fumbling, what do you think? __________________ -This the bottom of my thread.

05-07-2012, 10:01 AM	#4
thetophatfirm Red Join Date: Nov 2011 Posts: 162	A bigger climax?! Where can I go to learn bigger climax's? I have cleaned it up to about this point, when I showed it to a few layman they were pretty convinced, a whole deck would feel awesome man __________________ -This the bottom of my thread.

05-05-2012, 10:23 AM	#2
KGaborMagic K. Gábor Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 229 Donor Score: 110	This was unexpected. I like the idea! But yeah... too much patter

05-06-2012, 09:24 AM	#3
Mark Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 935	Saw it coming.. though I had no idea when. And since you already posted my thoughts yourself, be sure to clean up the performance. Very neat nonetheless. I wonder if this angle would lend itself to a bigger climax (like the whole deck changing).