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01-20-2013, 08:13 AM | #1 |
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 8
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Just a few things. In Mystery Surprise, you mention 2 jokers at the start of the description and they never come back. Where did they go? Also, I think it is a bit overpriced. The tricks themselves... I swear I've seen very similar tricks on youtube (I think your Mystery Card trick had a very similar version performed by Albert in his April performance). From what I've seen, they're not hugely original. If they are, please give more of a description of the effects. Just doing a quick browse on lybrary, I found two other ebooks at $10 which had 9 and 10 tricks in them, and their descriptions seemed more original, and more engaging.
I think just an edit of your descriptions, and perhaps the inclusion of two or three more tricks could make this a very attractive ebook. Good luck! Exscaly |
01-20-2013, 01:10 PM | #2 |
Join Date: Dec 2012
Posts: 7
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Hello Exscaly,
This is my first eBook so I decided to publish some of my favorite trick to perform.Ok I will take some of you advice, you may like the material or not. About the mystery card is based on original version which is clean. Most of them are variation of some classic trick, so it may be somethings different compare to the original trick.If you purchase this eBook, you will find out different 3 variation of the the 5-5 poker deal. The Esp-open prediction is a mentalist packet trick which you will love to perform this if you like mentalist magic. A very strong effect which I can put as a single project. Thank for you ideas, I will use it in my next project Jason Sheng |
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