05-31-2011, 04:58 AM | #1 |
David Nguyen
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Confidential Variation (No Platter)
What do you think? Feedback is appreciated.
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05-31-2011, 08:10 AM | #2 |
Move monkey atm
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first of all, it's "patter", not "platter", second, it was good, but you need more work
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05-31-2011, 09:09 AM | #3 |
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Yeah I wondered what plattered meant I like the idea behind it and everything, my only suggestion I could give you is to practice more.
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06-01-2011, 06:26 AM | #4 |
David Nguyen
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Oops, that's a typo, my mistake ahaha... I meant to type 'patter', I feel lousy now.
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"There are three types of people in this world; •People who talk and never do: The Lower Class •People who talk and do at the same time: The Middle Class •People who do before they ever talk: The Upper Class A real man does not need to talk. We are the upper class." -Joseph Lau |
06-01-2011, 09:30 AM | #5 |
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Good job.
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