Erdnase 2.0
 

This is my first attempt at performing this effect. I hope you like it.

pretty good for a 1st attempt imo, you just look stiff... but then again, who doesn't if they have to do something like that for the 1st time...

Pretty good for the first try, like what Alex said.

I think you can also try to get in the habit of retracting your thumb when doing the erdnase. That hitchhiker's thumb thingy actually gets criticized a lot by many magicians, especially when that happens when palming :thinking:

Other than that, I would love to see this after practice :)